tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post4121352667250497335..comments2023-10-07T19:13:06.716+10:00Comments on The odds are good, but the goods are odd: The BaneOpaquehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-70295562948996967732009-07-16T07:51:50.431+10:002009-07-16T07:51:50.431+10:00@Strawberry Girl - You are on a roll, aren't y...@Strawberry Girl - You are on a roll, aren't you? You are good at deciphering my words. Good on you!!!<br /><br />Yes, you are close. You've got the feel just right. <br /><br />Thanks a lot!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-60762803272610732812009-07-16T07:34:55.583+10:002009-07-16T07:34:55.583+10:00The Bane, the clue
A Bane can be something that d...The Bane, the clue<br /><br />A Bane can be something that destroys life, a person or thing that ruins or spoils, a deadly poison, death, destruction, ruin... Definitions via, dictionary.com<br /><br />An over view of the lines reveals the words, pure, cowardliness, sword, world, demons, hollow trust, corpse, souls, nightmares, demons, hell.<br /><br />You are marching us with the drums, towards the lake. You oddly choose to call a shadow pure... perhaps this indicates a small amount of pureness. <br /><br />People often hide behind cowardliness to avoid situations, thus crushing this idol with the sword... facing the truth. Lies are devious demons. Hollow trust another reminder of the ambiguity of lies. Your mouth speaks lies... kissing the skinless corpse, liers are weaklings and you can never sleep well when the deomns of your lies are roaming around. <br /><br />I may be stuck on the interpretation of lies being The bane. <br /><br />I almost missed the last line... you use whispers to convey something that is rarely done. So perhaps all of the trouble could have been avoided if only they had listened.<br /><br />Powerful<br /><br />SGStrawberry Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03395571842364752995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-52932349723353083462009-02-26T15:48:00.000+10:002009-02-26T15:48:00.000+10:00@Make me disappear - No worries. Umm, it is more b...@Make me disappear - No worries. <BR/><BR/>Umm, it is more black/doom than death. <BR/><BR/>Thank you.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-33294403299861374872009-02-26T15:45:00.000+10:002009-02-26T15:45:00.000+10:00Poetic, Very unlike you.I can very well visualize ...Poetic, Very unlike you.<BR/>I can very well visualize it.<BR/>Powerful,dark,profound.<BR/><BR/>I suppose it has a very metal-ish theme and writing pattern. Can go quite well with Death. Correct me if I am wrong.<BR/><BR/>And yes, sorry for commenting so late. ;)<BR/><BR/>-RahulMake Me Disappearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10333697054028733205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-28732458036267855602009-02-24T05:39:00.000+10:002009-02-24T05:39:00.000+10:00@Saadi - Thank you. I shall call you to help you u...@Saadi - Thank you. I shall call you to help you understand.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-77839235158017277142009-02-24T05:32:00.000+10:002009-02-24T05:32:00.000+10:00@Khaled KEM - Thanks Khaled!!! Yea, I mainly write...@Khaled KEM - Thanks Khaled!!! Yea, I mainly write these kind of songs. I am glad you liked it.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-71725651039618198112009-02-24T02:46:00.000+10:002009-02-24T02:46:00.000+10:00A dark one but I like it. I get the feeling that y...A dark one but I like it. I get the feeling that you jumped outside of yourself to discover what's going inside. I liked the use of nature elements of describing the conflict burning in there.Khaled KEMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16056388277824598564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-66759481438872359082009-02-24T00:48:00.000+10:002009-02-24T00:48:00.000+10:00Very poetic!! And flew over me totally?! I'll comm...Very poetic!! And flew over me totally?! I'll comment on this again once I understand it!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-71641503172772984722009-02-23T14:50:00.000+10:002009-02-23T14:50:00.000+10:00@Walker - Very well put!!! Thanks.@Walker - Very well put!!! Thanks.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-65264327351728771532009-02-23T14:44:00.000+10:002009-02-23T14:44:00.000+10:00Very nice I love the visualsThere is nothing more ...Very nice <BR/>I love the visuals<BR/><BR/>There is nothing more pure than fire.<BR/>It can't be polluted like water or love and as long as you have a flame burning inside you, either can you.Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00341478577481025783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-18117941437919318602009-02-23T12:27:00.000+10:002009-02-23T12:27:00.000+10:00@thepoetryman - Thanks a lot!!! Yea, I agree with ...@thepoetryman - Thanks a lot!!! Yea, I agree with you.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-69557302017120794572009-02-23T12:24:00.000+10:002009-02-23T12:24:00.000+10:00Shadows have always moved something inside of me, ...Shadows have always moved something inside of me, inside us all I assume. We are the leaders if we choose to be and... we'd better choose to lead soon or "the sword" will lose its shadow.<BR/><BR/>Nice job, Brose.Mark Prime (tpm/Confession Zero)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04683863540465969835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-1451593987037279772009-02-23T06:02:00.000+10:002009-02-23T06:02:00.000+10:00@Alexandra - Oh, thanks a lot!!! I shall visit you...@Alexandra - Oh, thanks a lot!!! I shall visit yours as well.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-70821748646721621472009-02-23T03:21:00.000+10:002009-02-23T03:21:00.000+10:00I like your poem, it's honest and that makes it so...I like your poem, it's honest and that makes it so sobering... is it time for us to finally wake up?...<BR/>I like your blog very much and will visit again.<BR/>AlexJosephinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04557732708043833827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-84668728339282778902009-02-22T15:40:00.000+10:002009-02-22T15:40:00.000+10:00@Linda - Thank you. More of a premonition than pre...@Linda - Thank you. More of a premonition than prediction.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-32515855573060228592009-02-22T14:00:00.000+10:002009-02-22T14:00:00.000+10:00Well done....a bit terrifying...and possibly with ...Well done....a bit terrifying...and possibly with some words of truth in the dark otherworld? Premonitions?<BR/>Predictions?<BR/>LindaLinda S. Sochahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03281672541959206302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-26713275703676998722009-02-22T09:51:00.000+10:002009-02-22T09:51:00.000+10:00@Cynthia - Yea!!! March on!!!@Cynthia - Yea!!! March on!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-87436575114291751702009-02-22T09:00:00.000+10:002009-02-22T09:00:00.000+10:00Oh Yeah! March on! Strike outinjustice.Oh Yeah! March on! Strike out<BR/>injustice.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-68464062753354750342009-02-21T17:01:00.000+10:002009-02-21T17:01:00.000+10:00@George - Thank you!!! Yea, I have started followi...@George - Thank you!!! Yea, I have started following your blog. Hope you shall too.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-8446514557572078192009-02-21T16:55:00.000+10:002009-02-21T16:55:00.000+10:00subcultural underworld tones,, I like it...Thanks ...subcultural underworld tones,, I like it...<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the visit to my little subterranean abode.<BR/><BR/>Feel free to drop in again anytime...Georgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04903004698363242844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-84409821386008706672009-02-21T08:59:00.000+10:002009-02-21T08:59:00.000+10:00@Cocoyea - Yea, it is something like that.@Cocoyea - Yea, it is something like that.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-45981146135077042592009-02-21T08:47:00.000+10:002009-02-21T08:47:00.000+10:00This sounds and feels like a spell being cast.This sounds and feels like a spell being cast.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-47332370478524791122009-02-21T08:41:00.000+10:002009-02-21T08:41:00.000+10:00@Rikkij - Yea, you are spot on with that observati...@Rikkij - Yea, you are spot on with that observation. Cheers mate.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-69997724580822704452009-02-21T00:45:00.000+10:002009-02-21T00:45:00.000+10:00a dark journey to the lake of fire. There are warn...a dark journey to the lake of fire. There are warnings here. Good stuff.~RickRikkijhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10933627704520555139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-5596915467609541222009-02-20T17:42:00.000+10:002009-02-20T17:42:00.000+10:00@Shadow - Thank you@Shadow - Thank youOpaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.com