tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post719500861683351243..comments2023-10-07T19:13:06.716+10:00Comments on The odds are good, but the goods are odd: Below 14 upon 100Opaquehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-17635234933812174292009-07-19T16:06:36.717+10:002009-07-19T16:06:36.717+10:00@Strawberry Girl - I am glad you can identify such...@Strawberry Girl - I am glad you can identify such details. Thanks for reading.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-12168124677070487102009-07-19T12:28:09.285+10:002009-07-19T12:28:09.285+10:00I like the sense here of emptyness, solitariness. ...I like the sense here of emptyness, solitariness. Re-thinking everything trying to come to a wholeness. Words that stick out are tonne and Moline... must look that up. Still contemplating what below 14 upon 100 could mean. The line "Bitter lemons, useless ABC's, punctures and piercings fill my routine" speaks volumes. I can recognize a similar style here to my own. Which has come to be very minimalist with the words. Oh, I am recognizing something in the last few lines... the light dimming... to light (Beep) that sounds like the last bleeps on the monitor in a hospital, the Beep is the end. (Sad)Strawberry Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03395571842364752995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-28272143933837592592009-03-18T07:46:00.000+10:002009-03-18T07:46:00.000+10:00@Meena - Yes, undoubtedly depressing!!! Thanks for...@Meena - Yes, undoubtedly depressing!!! Thanks for reading!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-20554960087057453932009-03-18T07:44:00.000+10:002009-03-18T07:44:00.000+10:00Wow,definitely depressing.Wow,<BR/>definitely depressing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-22350240445551002702009-02-23T22:14:00.000+10:002009-02-23T22:14:00.000+10:00@Saadi - Thanks a lot Saadi!!!@Saadi - Thanks a lot Saadi!!!Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-36046481541911013852009-02-23T22:09:00.000+10:002009-02-23T22:09:00.000+10:00I remember this one most of all!!! Possibly one of...I remember this one most of all!!! Possibly one of your best and as always impeccable to the last word!<BR/>Good going!Saadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06330931132103830002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-56671363634592864782009-02-14T05:27:00.000+10:002009-02-14T05:27:00.000+10:00@A'Jay - You are spot on with the observations. Th...@A'Jay - You are spot on with the observations. Thank you.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-39315912762368459282009-02-14T05:26:00.000+10:002009-02-14T05:26:00.000+10:00@Drive-thru- Yes, it is quite a powerful one. Yea,...@Drive-thru- Yes, it is quite a powerful one. Yea, I went experimental on this one with the structuring.Opaquehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01673267899145564334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-54229740720280671092009-02-13T22:45:00.000+10:002009-02-13T22:45:00.000+10:00That was strong and emotive Bros', thank you for s...That was strong and emotive Bros', thank you for steering me towards it...<BR/><BR/>am I right, there seems to be an anger there (perhaps I just read that into it) and also a sorrow... I liked the emotions your words convey...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7635065674627483405.post-56310671337311928272009-01-17T14:10:00.000+10:002009-01-17T14:10:00.000+10:00wow Ajey. This is a powerful one. Completely diffe...wow Ajey. This is a powerful one. Completely different style in structuring the sentences.Khaled KEMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16056388277824598564noreply@blogger.com