Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Illusion


This engulfing grip of illusion converge fatality
Perceiving a dark world of duality (ROBOTIC VOCALS SPOKEN - INTRO)

(Instrumentals – 15 seconds)

Diffusing into this
World of uncertainty
Imbalanced life of joy and reality
Dissolving into this
Never ending polarity

(-TEMPO)
(Instrumentals – 15 seconds)

Weaving a web of lies
Leading to one’s own demise
Delusion makes one rise
Illusion hears no cries

(FEMALE VOCALS)
The charmer shall look you in the eye
And, when you believe, he shall lie
Delusion has struck you

Divide your dreams and thoughts (CLEAN VOCALS)
Chop your dreams and thoughts (GROWL VOCALS)

(REGAIN PRIMARY TEMPO)

Remove the veil (ROBOTIC VOCALS)

Divide your dreams and thoughts (CLEAN VOCALS)
Chop your dreams and thoughts (GROWL VOCALS)

(Instrumentals – 15 seconds)
(Guitar solo)

(-TEMPO)

(FEMALE VOCALS)
The charmer shall look you in the eye
And, when you believe, he shall lie
Delusion has struck you

(Guitar Bridge)

Weaving a web of lies
Leading to one’s own demise
Delusion makes one rise
Illusion hears no cries

(Drum Bridge)
(REGAIN PRIMARY TEMPO)

Diffusing into this
World of uncertainty
Imbalanced life of joy and reality
Dissolving into this
Never ending polarity

Engulfed into the world of illusion
Trapped in the world of confusion
You shall find yourself lost (SPOKEN - EXTRO)


Copyright © Ajey Padival 2005 (Brisbane, Australia; +61-434360675; ajeypadival@msn.com)

Image by Right Brain

31 responses:

Anonymous said...

I love how you've ended this piece, it just sums it all up. Well done, you.

Opaque said...

@SarahA - Thank you!!!

Sakhi. said...

nice one....and d pik is awesome:)

Opaque said...

@•bLue-eyed sOuL - Thank you!!!

Make Me Disappear said...

It's beautiful AJey....I loved it...

Opaque said...

@Make Me Disappear - Thanks.

Shadow said...

you have captured that incoherent illusion perfectly!

Saadi said...

This is really cool! I loved this one alot!

Great going, Brosreview!

And the image is really cool!

Opaque said...

@Shadow - Thank you.

Opaque said...

@Saadi - Thank you!!!

Josephine said...

Wow, you captured it all!! It's everything I'd like to dismiss from my life... but polarity will most likely stay forever...
It's an eye opener. Great Song!!
-Alex

PS. I actually turn off the backgroung music, so it is better to hear the melody of your songs...

Opaque said...

@Alexandra - Thank you!!!

"PS. I actually turn off the backgroung music, so it is better to hear the melody of your songs..."

Thanks a lot for that!!! It must enable you to feel the song even better.

Rikkij said...

this is really put together well. everything in place. witchy, sensual, powerful, alluring. has it all. nice Job, AJ ~Rick

Opaque said...

@Rikkij - Cheers mate!!!

Kat Mortensen said...

I'm hearing this in a kind of 80s vein - sort of Gary Numan meets Annie Lennox.

I like it!

Kat

P.S. I invite you to visit Invisible Keepsakes, if you haven't and my latest Blast From the Past is up too.
Are you on Twitter?

Opaque said...

@Poetikat - Thank you!!! And, thanks for the invite!!! I shall be there in a few moments time.

Umm, sorry, I am not on Twitter.

SandyCarlson said...

This is so strong. The image makes me think of a mask.

Opaque said...

@SandyCarlson - Thanks!!!

Arjun said...

I always amazing to read cerebral philosophies, especially when they're written to stir. I saw a bit of Maynard in that, Ajey. An AWESOME track. The lines for the female vocal part is brilliant. However, if I may be allowed to say it, the first robotic vocal lines did not appeal to me. Now, you know how I feel about feedbacks. It's nice to know what the public feels but in the end, you know best why and what a particular line would fit wherever it does. So, I urge you not to change it. Retain it. They're your personal words.

Opaque said...

@Arjun - Thanks mate!!! I value your comment. I shall explain that section the next time I call you, for sure. There is a reason, a vital one behind that. Cheers!!!

Noelle Dunn.... A Poet in Progress said...

"the charmer shall look you in the eye and when you believe, he shall lie" That resonates. Your writing is really great. Thanks for your comments on my page!

Opaque said...

@Noelle - Thank you!!!

Strawberry Girl said...

Yes, that does strike a cord. ;D I think I've tended to be naieve in the past... hard habit to break. Love the Robotic voice, and the bit of a growl right in the middle!! :D

Opaque said...

@Strawberry Girl - Ah, thanks a lot!

Anonymous said...

my favorite lines was the quatrain after the second instrumentals...

it was beautiful!! :)

Opaque said...

@Leo - Thanks!

thoughts said...

truly beautiful.

Opaque said...

@thoughts - Thank you!

island of peace said...

i think i have almost finished your blog.. :)

Opaque said...

@island of peace - Thanks! I appreciate it!

itsyvitsy said...

Ajey,

I am simply blown away. I have nothing more to tell. Power all over, that's it, raw power emanating from each and every line. Thanks for directing me to this piece.

-Vittal