Monday, January 18, 2010

Stained rope


(Bass INTRO)
(Guitar begins)
(Drums begin)
(Keyboard begins)

I held you close
As I
Breathed
Life into you
My tears
Flowed down
To clean
The stained rope

(Instrumentals – 2 minutes)
(Guitar Bridge)

This is a
Colourful world
These are
Colourful people

Colourful world with
Colourful people

Colourful people in this
Colourful world

(Drum Fill)

But
The colours
They change

(Drum Fill)

The colours
They change

(Drum Fill + Guitar Bridge)

The colours
They change

(Drum Fill + Guitar Bridge)

The colours
They change

(Drum Fill + Guitar Bridge)

The colours
They change

(Drum Fill + Guitar Bridge)
(Drum Fill)
(Guitar Solo)

I prayed
May nothing but happiness come your way

(Guitar Bridge)
(Keyboard Solo + Choir – Ooh)
(BACKGROUND SPOKEN VOCALS + Drums stop)
It is time to let go (x8)

(Choir – Ooh + Vocal EXTRO)

I pray
May nothing but happiness come your way


Copyright © Ajey Padival 2009 (Brisbane, Australia; +61434360675; ajeypadival@msn.com)

Image by PNu
Edited by Ajey Padival

34 responses:

Strawberry Girl said...

Darling, you know how much this means to me as it fits our situation now. I love you sweetheart xx

findingmywingsinlife said...

A heartfelt song, filled with words and feelings said & unsaid. Beautiful, bittersweet, and lovely. Nearly takes ones breath away to read it. Impressive.

Keep strong, the both of you!

Cynthia said...

"The colors they change". So true,
so very true, all a part of this
thing called life.

Rick said...

The emotion is so strong. You can feel the tempo build to crescendo. Good stuff, guys. ~rick

Brosreview said...

@Strawberry Girl - Muwah! Yes, it does! But, not to its complete extent. Well, I am sure you know that! Love you darling!

Brosreview said...

@Strawberry Girl - Muwah! Yes, it does! But, not to its complete extent. Well, I am sure you know that! Love you darling!

Brosreview said...

@findingmywingsinlife - Hmm, thanks!

Brosreview said...

@Cynthia - Ah, sadly yes!

Brosreview said...

@Rick - Well spotted! I was sure you would spot the crecendo. Thanks mate!!!

Eva said...

That was beautifully sad. Everyone must feel the pain of letting go at some point in their life, all we can do is look well upon it and wish the best to those we must say goodbye to.

The Write Girl said...

Nicely written Ajey. Your imagery and words are beautiful and fluid.

Mirror Image said...

takes my breath away....perfect for a melancholic day of mine.

PS the Pratsie said...

simple but not without its hidden message :)

Strawberry Girl said...

Thankfully sweetheart, I'm letting go of the past and grasping the future with you... thus this applies to us... though I know you meant it in a different sense... xoxo :)

aditya said...

Colors change. They were meant to change Ajey.

Man is not the eternal truth.
There are no eternal truths.

A nice write this.

Aditya.

aditya said...

Colors change. They were meant to change Ajey.

Man is not the eternal truth.
There are no eternal truths.

A nice write this.

Aditya.

Brosreview said...

@Eva - Yes, exactly. Thanks.

Brosreview said...

@The Write Girl - Thanks.

Brosreview said...

@Mirror Image - Thanks

Brosreview said...

@PS - Yes, thanks!

Brosreview said...

@Strawberry girl - Yes honey. Muwah! I love you!!!

Brosreview said...

@Aditya - Thanks!!

BloggerMouth said...

Two minutes of instrumentals followed by those words... Ajey you really have a penchant for this.

Colors change... :)

Good luck to you two.

TechnoBabe said...

The words you write are meant to stir the heart. It is a deep love indeed who wishes such good things to the beloved so freely.

Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Ajey,
You got me all weepy here. This is so touching. "It is time to let go" - so very telling and emotional. True love has been portrayed here and I love it.

Alexandra Garland said...

Ajey,
The words are piercing with emotions. Excellent write!!
-Alex

Brosreview said...

@Blogger Mouth - I appreciate you noticing the time frames of the instrumentals that I add. Thanks!!!

Brosreview said...

@TechnoBabe - Yes, true. Thanks!

Brosreview said...

@Vittaldas - Thanks!!

Brosreview said...

@Alexandra - Thanks, so much!!

Saadi said...

LOVED the interplay of 'Colour full world' n 'Colour full ppl'!

Rocked it out once again, man!!

This one I wanna hear!

island of peace said...

simply adorable and really painful.

Brosreview said...

@Saadi - Thanks so much!

Brosreview said...

@island of peace - Thanks!