Wednesday, August 18, 2010

Distorted



(Bass BEGINS)
(Keyboard BEGINS)
(Drum BEGINS)
(Drum FILL)
(Guitar BEGINS)
(Bass SOLO)

(LOW-PITCH)
Caught among these thoughts
Frozen feelings under my skin
Befriending sweet agony
Passing out with a sweet release

(HIGH-PITCH)
Blackened back of my soul
Why are you looking right and left?
I am right behind

(Drum FILL)
(SPOKEN)
I am just behind

(SING)
And, when I focused
I noticed
The sound of madness
That made me ask for more!

Give me more!

The fuse inside my head is blown!

Give me more!

The venom I drink, paralyzes me!
The sickness in me, overrules me!
The bite I take, pinches my inside!
The scars I tear, bleeds my skin!
The holes I drill, pains within!

(Drum FILL)

My madness asks for more!
Give me more!

(Drum BREAK)

(SPOKEN)
Just give me more!

(Instrumental section – 1 minute)

Tapping his fingers on the wood
Pursing his lips on...
(Instrumental BREAK)
(SPOKEN)
Well!

(Instruments START)

Building a fortress without a wall
You seep inside me like a drug

(GROWL alternates with CLEAN VOCALS)
Shredding my dignity!
Peeling me off my sympathy
What I do!
I do it for a reason
Moral pleasure!
I’m inspired by lies

(Guitar SOLO)
(Instrumental BREAK except CLEAN GUITARS)
(Keyboard SOLO without DRUMS)
(ALL INSTRUMENTS BEGIN)
(Instrumentals – 2 minutes)
(Instrumental BREAK except BASS)

(SOFT VOCALS)
And, when I focused
I noticed
The sound of madness
That made me ask for more
Why don’t you give me more?

(Drum FILL)
(Instruments BEGIN)

The fuse inside my head is blown!

The venom I drink, paralyzes me!
The sickness in me, overrules me!
The bite I take, pinches my inside!
The scars I tear, bleeds my skin!
The holes I drill, pains within!

My madness asks for more!
Give me more!
Just give me more!
And more and more!

(Instrumental break 8 seconds)
(ONLY PIANO)

Visions of you
Prancing before my bloodshot eyes
Get out of my sight
Now

Don’t make me
Tell you this once again

(SPOKEN)
Okay
You asked for this

(Instrumental START)
(Guitar SOLO)

Argh!

(GROWL)

Visions of you
Prancing before my bloodshot eyes
Get out of my sight
Now

Don’t make me
Tell you once again

(SING)

I hate you!
As much as I’d loved you!

I asked for more!
Just a little more!
You gave no more!
You make me feel!
Much needier than I am!

A disrupted morale!
A distorted vision!
A disgusted soul!
I have become

Do you see me anymore?
The real me is lost
Within the sand

(Drum FILL)

Distorted
I have become to myself
Distorted
I see the world to be
Distorted
You have become to me
Distorted
I have become to myself

(Instrumentals – 8 seconds)

(ALL INSTRUMENTS STOP EXCEPT PIANO AND BASS)

The venom I drink, paralyzes me
The sickness in me, overrules me
The bite I take, pinches my inside
The scars I tear, bleeds my skin
The holes I drill, pains within

(SPOKEN REPEAT)
The real me is lost
The real me is found
The real me is lost
The real me is found...

(FADE OUT)



Photo of Rachel Weisz

Visual Effect by Ajey Padival

Copyright © Ajey Padival 2010 (Brisbane, Australia; +61434360675; ajeypadival@msn.com)




16 responses:

Inky said...

WOW!!! this is amazing ,love the photo as well. You had me in a trance, kinda distorted for me in a nice way. GOODLUCK on this. Im in awe!!

Wendilea said...

I'm sorry Ajey. I like the dark mood of the song alright. But it is hard to think of darkness and hate with the image of that smiling girl and not feel a bit disturbed.

The Write Girl said...

I can certainly feel the darkness and madness in every word. Nicely written here AJ.

SandyCarlson said...

I feel every bit of this one.

Shadow said...

sounds like a drug. is a drug. intense, ajey, well done!!!!!

findingmywingsinlife said...

I see the madman and the sane man's commonalities in this. The deepness of raw emotions torn between wants and logic and things unwanted...

It could also give the feel of looking in the mirror and loving/hating what you see..of the hurts given both to and from.. the fury of needs unmet yet taken so close to its peak. so many different angles and ways to look, and sometimes looking overlooks.

That is alot of whats here and yet none at all..distorted, just as the title implies. Just sharing my thoughts...:) It is a very well woven piece of work, well done!

Opaque said...

@Inky - Thanks!! :)

Opaque said...

@Wendilea - I understand.

Opaque said...

@The Write Girl - Thanks.

Opaque said...

@Sandy - That is the intention.

Opaque said...

@Shadow - Thanks!

Opaque said...

@findingmywingsinlife - Hmm... interesting!!! very interesting!!! Thanks!!!

Scribbling Girl said...

Wow that was so good!
A trance passing through as one gets lost in it!
There is this darkness which makes u get lost in the song from inside!
Amazing stuff!

Walker said...

Life is a blur
Clarity is only for the mind to see

Opaque said...

@Scribbling Girl - Thanks!!

Opaque said...

@Walker - Very true!