Monday, April 20, 2009

Burn the eternal shadows


(LOW-PITCHED GURGLE)
Tasty blood
Satisfies me
Sacrifice the
Whores in blasphemy
Feast upon their flesh

Grinning at the East
Burn the eternal shadows
Dancing before these eyes
Blacking out this grey
View from the grave

(Drums stop)
(Instrumental Bridge)
(Drums begin)

(+TEMPO)

Sleep under the sun
Sing below the shying moon
Dance in the black rain
Cause evil reigns

(SFX-Thunder)

(HIGH-PITCHED SHRIEK)
Boil the corpse, bite the meat

(SCREAM)
Pluck the fingers
Tear the skin
Make the sacrifice
Send the soul away to
Kiss the god below

(REGAIN PRIMARY TEMPO)

(LOW-PITCHED GURGLE)
Walk on my
Funeral pyre
Spit at Your grave
Burn the eternal shadows


Copyright © Ajey Padival 2009 (Brisbane, Australia; +61-434360675; ajeypadival@msn.com)

Image by Claudio Goldini

42 responses:

zorlone said...

Vampires? Undead? Paranormal?
Some of the few words that first entered my head! This is a bit chilling and mind boggling!
Overall effect: Wickedly outstanding piece of work!

Z

Brosreview said...

@zorlone - True. Thanks a lot!!!

Linda S. Socha said...

Bros

I like meditative music in general.
I love the romantic poetic period so I am lost in Schumann's dreaming while reading your recent post.

Talk about juxtaposition! I would love to be able to say...and what is the thinking here behind the verse? I would like to feel an understanding that could be in sync with intent or inspiration?

So, since I am not able to converse over coffee or tea, may I have your permission to ask...Please tell me more?
Linda

Linda S. Socha said...

Bros...Reading again...it is really quite well done...with or withon knowning inspiration or intention?

Were you a classical piano student?
Linda

Brosreview said...

@Linda S. Socha - Yes, I did realize that this form of music isn't appreciated or even heard by many.

I shall tell you more shortly.

Brosreview said...

@Linda S. Socha - Yes, I did study piano for a very short period though. Thanks a lot!!!

Rikkij said...

The low gurgle kinda set the stage. what kinda background would this performance have? Very intricate lacing up of thoughts, AJ-all nice and tight. ~Rick

Brosreview said...

@Rikkij - Thanks a lot!!!!

Walker said...

The beast needs to be fed and the garbage of the earth has to be harvested to fertilize the ground with the dead

Brosreview said...

@Walker - Exactly!!! Thanks for reading!!!

Cursed♪♫ said...

Lol !!!
Loved your post!
I'm back :)

Brosreview said...

@Cursed - Welcome back!!! Thanks a lot!!!

Maverick said...

A heavy dose of intensely black emotions!!! Very well presented....would go down well wid a good supporting track...am sure u hav gt dat right!

Shadow said...

this sounds like a witches dance! cool!

SarahA said...

Ajey I'm beginning to worry about you! Ha! You are more crazy/mad than me! *dance*
I think you do this style very well though and makes the reader actually feel they are there when reading (or this one anyway.
'sing below the shying moon' my favourite line of the whole.
Well done, you.

Brosreview said...

@Maverick - Thank you!!!

Brosreview said...

@Shadow - Yea, the title does make one think so. Thanks, you!!!

Brosreview said...

@SarahA - Thanks a lot!!!

Poetikat said...

I want so much to HEAR your songs - the music that goes with them. Are you playing a guitar? Or perhaps another instrument?
In my youth, I was a bit of a vampire fan. Have you seen the film, 'The Hunger'?

Thanks for your comment on my recent poem. I really appreciate your loyalty.

Kat

Brosreview said...

@Poetikat - I took some piano lessons many years back. I play the keyboard to a certain extent. Hopefully, sometime, soon I shall be able to add music to these lyrics. I shall post the link, for sure, when done so.

Thanks, you. And, about commenting to your psots, pleasure was all mine.

Pretty Me!! said...

supeeerrrr kool ;D

Brosreview said...

@Pretty Me!! - Thanks, you.

The Write Girl said...

Hey Brosreview,

This is a dark one!! A thrilling, poetic read.

Brosreview said...

@The Write Girl - Thank you!!!

droL said...

Thanks, Brosreview, for dropping by my blog and for the wonderful motivational words! They flow into me like blissful waters into a dry pond.

I will definitely write more, for words keep rushing in waiting to be written.

You blog is a masterpiece! The first thing I did after reading was to hit the Follow button!

Have a pleasant day!

Brosreview said...

@drol - Thanks a lot!!! That means a lot to me.

sudharm baxi said...

Pretty black these days?
Or just the expressions..

Loved a few usage ..

"Boil the corpse, bite the meat
"

"Walk on my
Funeral pyre
Spit at Your grave
Burn the eternal shadows "

Brosreview said...

@sudharm baxi - Thanks, you!!!

Make Me Disappear said...

Ajey,

This is outstanding. Slow death, is it?

Fab work once again..!!!

Damn good.

I loved the title and artwork..

thank You

Woman in a Window said...

Holy crap, Broseview! You eating babies again?

Brosreview said...

@Make Me Disappear - Thanks, you!!!

Brosreview said...

@Woman in a Window - Hell yea!!! Thanks for reading!!!

Alexandra Garland said...

Hi Ajey,
This one will give me nightmares... but I appreciate the honest expression!
-Alex

Brosreview said...

@Alexandra - I'm sorry for that.

Thank you!!!

Viji said...

every line is a gem buddy :)ur song gave me goosebumps, not because of

"Boil the corpse, bite the meat"
"Pluck the fingers
Tear the skin"
"Spit at Your grave"

but the way you wrote it(powerful write), to make us close our eyes for a second in fright..

"Burn the eternal shadows" I could feel the tempo building up even in silence.

Brosreview said...

@Viji - Thanks a lot!!!

Saadi said...

Somehow all I got was gore!!

I'm sorry!

Brosreview said...

@Saadi - Thanks for reading.

Kartz said...

Wo ho ho... Someone's taking Gothic to deeper levels.

Keep at it, mate!

Peace.

Brosreview said...

@Kartz - Thanks!!!

thoughts said...

ouch!!!

Brosreview said...

@thoughts - Yes! Thanks for reading!