Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Freedom

Dedicated to Rajesh

Freedom from the chains

I look to the top

Here

I am coming
I am coming

I am coming

I am coming

I am coming

I am coming

I am coming

I am coming

Holding my breathe

But, still breathing

Floating in the depths for too long

I am coming

I am coming

I am coming

I am coming

Here, I come

For some air 


Photo by Ajey Padival

Copyright © Ajey Padival 2010 (Brisbane, Australia; +61434360675; ajeypadival@msn.com


12 responses:

TechnoBabe said...

It is like you are saying "I am coming" on each rung on the ladder as you ascend. There are many kinds of ladders. The great thing about this writing is that you achieve the goal, you arrive there where you were climbing to, and you breathe.

Katherine said...

And freedom is found when you reach the top!

LL Cool Joe said...

Thank you for visiting my blog. Reading your profile it sounds like we share a love of music. :) Possibly different music, but that's what makes the blogging world so interesting. :)

Scribbling Girl said...

wow this was energetic and liberating and i agree to what TechnoBabe said its like 'i am coming' for each step u ascend...i love the positivity keep it up :)

Opaque said...

@TechnoBabe - Yes. Thanks!

Opaque said...

@Katherine - Yes, it is...

Opaque said...

@LL - Pleasure is mine.

Opaque said...

@Scribbling Girl - Thanks.

The Write Girl said...

Beautiful words AJ...I read this as a struggle. Almost as if one is drowning and struggling to rise for air. I like how your work can be interpreted in different ways.

ladynimue said...

I read more than what you wrote .. dunno why, for every line, i read again and replied in my own way ..

Opaque said...

@ladynimue - I understand.

Opaque said...

@The Write Girl - Yes, a struggle indeed. Thanks!