Dedicated to Rajesh
Freedom from the chains
I look to the top
Here
I am coming
I am coming
I am coming
I am coming
I am coming
I am coming
I am coming
I am coming
Holding my breathe
But, still breathing
Floating in the depths for too long
I am coming
I am coming
I am coming
I am coming
Here, I come
For some air
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12 responses:
It is like you are saying "I am coming" on each rung on the ladder as you ascend. There are many kinds of ladders. The great thing about this writing is that you achieve the goal, you arrive there where you were climbing to, and you breathe.
And freedom is found when you reach the top!
Thank you for visiting my blog. Reading your profile it sounds like we share a love of music. :) Possibly different music, but that's what makes the blogging world so interesting. :)
wow this was energetic and liberating and i agree to what TechnoBabe said its like 'i am coming' for each step u ascend...i love the positivity keep it up :)
@TechnoBabe - Yes. Thanks!
@Katherine - Yes, it is...
@LL - Pleasure is mine.
@Scribbling Girl - Thanks.
Beautiful words AJ...I read this as a struggle. Almost as if one is drowning and struggling to rise for air. I like how your work can be interpreted in different ways.
I read more than what you wrote .. dunno why, for every line, i read again and replied in my own way ..
@ladynimue - I understand.
@The Write Girl - Yes, a struggle indeed. Thanks!
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