Myopic eyes stare through the vapours
Froth from the broth, consumed
Truth in the lies, assumed
The contagious silence
The stinging grief
The paleness in his life
The staleness of his existence
The demons float into him
Into his heart, it creeps
Before he becomes aware
Photo by Ajey Padival
Copyright © Ajey Padival 2010 (Brisbane, Australia; +61434360675; ajeypadival@msn.com)
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ajey,
this is too powerful. fabulous. i have a small gift for you, to keep me in your mind. :)
will you accept it?
http://window2mysoul.wordpress.com/2010/06/13/golden-pen-award/
have a beautiful week ahead
A new album... reconciling distance?
I don't think there is truth in lies. Just me. I would not want staleness in my existence. I hope you do not feel like that.
As the veil falls away enlightening the mind of the true nature of being.
Makes me think
there is so much to this one. its the feel of seeing things so clearly yet not, seeing but not feeling, lost but not broken... perhaps I'm a bit off there, I feel like I'm missing something here, but I will figure it out :)
This reminds me of the lonely feeling people have sometimes. You have a way with words.
@island of peace - Thanks for the complement and the award!
@Strawberry Girl - Thanks!
@Technobabe - I agree. And, that is exactly what the song conveys.
@Walker - True. Thanks.
@findingmywingsinlife - No, you are not off. Thanks.
@Eva - Thanks!!!
Another powerful and amazing write AJ. Your words are always rich and deep. I love your latest works.
@the Write girl - Thanks!!
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