(SNARL VOCALS FULL)
Engulfed in froth
Drowning in dreams
Numbness comes to life
(Percussion Bridge)
Circling the scene
Seeing the prey
Cross the figure of flames
(Bells begin)
Two steps to the right
Unseen in the light
Scar them apart
Tear them apart
Pull them apart
A song to the moon
Dreams grow black wings
To get lost into the dark sky
Hunt the hunter down
Ferment the growing wings
Bang
The hammer from hell
To deceive the caustic soul
(Bells stop)
Copyright © Ajey Padival 2009 (Brisbane, Australia; +61-434360675; ajeypadival@msn.com)
Image by HOPE
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Very nice work!
@zorlone - Thank you!!!
Wow, des were strong words!!!! Luvd da intense feel to it and along with the accompanyin music dat u hav in mind...I think it'll b wonderful...in a dark way!
@Maverick - Thanks for dropping by. And, yes the intensity of darkness if pretty high in this one. And, as you spotted the musical element adds a whole new level to the darkness. I am glad you like this one. Thank you!!!
Hi Ajey,
I sense a struggle, battle, lost hope… there is so much of that in our world… dark, but so real... brings deep reflection,
-Alex
@Alexandra - True!!! Thank you!!!
"Dreams grow black wings
To get lost into the dark sky" - that is great poetry.
@joaquin carvel- Thanks mate!!!
very carnal. i like that.
@Shadow - Thank you!!!
AJ-Dreams grow black wings
To get lost into the dark sky_ loved that line.The song glides in flight and you made Shadow use the word carnal. A bonus! ~Rick
@Rikkij - Thanks a lot!!!
beautiful poetry intacted!
brilliant words there...
I like it Ajey.
Your poems always reflect the struggle that we all face, inside and outside.
@PULKIT - Thank you!!!
@Khaled KEM - I am glad you like this one. Thank you!!!
Thanks for following. I shall be following you back. Do check out my list too. The link to your site will be there.
Are you going commercial any time soon? Where can I listen to your songs?
Btw, I have written a song too. Check out the labels.
Z
@zorlone - I am intending to go commercial once I find a band to play my songs. I am not very good at instruments. So, I need to rely on some band. Currently, there are a few songs being used by bands. But, they haven't finished working on them. So, I do not have any links to share.
I shall check out your song soon. Cheers!!! And, thanks for following.
That's great news! I wish you all the best!
Cheers indeed!
Z
This may seem random....But this resonates with me because two days ago my daughter and I visited a WWII battleship. On some level, I feel this there as part of that literal struggle.
@SandyCarlson - I like your take on this song. Thank you!!!
@zorlone - Thanks for your best wishes!!!
See, this amazes me, that there are so many disparate souls out there. This one is well formed and yet alien to me.
@Woman in a Window - Okay, let me let this off me chest. Frankly, I expected you, specifically, to decode this one with ease. I reckon another read shall help you understand this better. I know you will get the message as it revolves around a topic you are interested in (judging from your poems). Thanks for reading!!!
fkntastic write, once again...
Dark, intense, as the people who commented before me have already said..
this is very-very abstract..
-Rahul
Such tortured words Ajey. But you write them so well, always.
'A song to the moon' Hmmmmmmmmmmmm
Keep writing!
@SarahA - Thank you!!!
The danger is alway where you see it but onlt consumes you in the shadows.
Great stuff man
Keep searching
I should confess to you AJ...
Most of the time I read your songs as just lyrics..for me I love words and their play...
For the first time I was curious to know what a percussion bridge is and how a snarl vocals would sound and its for the first time I even cared to hear the song in a song.
I heard it today along with the snarl vocals full :), percussion, bells...I just realised how potent a lyric will become when it becomes a song...
Ah! then lyrics
let me tell you how it sounds to me..
I added "caustic soul-" as the first line to all the stanzas..I could be wrong... but a good exercise for my rusted brain :D
lines that stole my heart:
"Dreams grow black wings
To get lost into the dark sky"
"Hunt the hunter down
Ferment the growing wings"
@Walker - Thanks mate!!!
@Viji - I appreciate the way you go that extra mile to understand my songs. Thanks for that.
Yes, your imagination is right. The title resonates till the end. So, no, you are not wrong there.
And, do not call your brain rusted. The poems that you come up with are very good.
Thanks a lot!!!
Hey Brosreview,
Wonderful song. Your work always sound like poetry to me. P.S. the site appears to be growing nicely. : )
@The Write Girl - Thanks a lot!!! Yea, this one is quite poetic, I gather.
I've just woke up from an unsettling dream and your song
matches the dream. Yikes!
@Cynthia - I will consider this song to be a nightmare then. Thanks for reading.
This one leaves a bad taste in my mouth...I am guessing that is the effect you were aiming for.
@Meena - Yea, sort of. Thanks for reading.
evocative of so much,
of fears we never express, real or imagined, love that the image is by HOPE too :)
Katie
@Rainbow dreams - Thank you!!!
"A song to the moon
Dreams grow black wings
To get lost into the dark sky
"
Sheer imagination.
@sudharm baxi - Thank you!!!
Okay, I'm going to take a wild swing here! Why do I have a feeling it's about a nightmare or something related to it?!
I didn't get parts but it is dark...like most of your work! Also good!
@Saadi - Thanks for reading.
Really like this one as well. Vividly imaginative and dense.
Your lyrics reminds me of William Blake's poetry, but your style is still very very personal!
Thanks a lot for following my blog, by the way.
/Jenny
@Jenny - Thank you!!! I am glad you like this one.
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